The charts below give information about propotion of water consumption in various fields such as, agricultural, domastic as well as industrial use in six areas around the world. It can be seen that, while the highest percentage of water use all over six areas is for agricultural purpose.
With regard to, agriculture more than four_fifth of water consumption is obviously seen, in central asia, south east asia and africa. "AS" three_quarter is been used in south america. However, both of europe and north amarica make water use for agricultural use nearly close to each other at 32% and 39% respectively.
Moving to, industrial use is peridomenantly noticed in europe at 53% and north america at 48%. Meanwhile, the others four areas show very small propotion for water use at this purpose.
After all, consumption water for domestic purpose is the lowest percentage among all six areas. Which is nearly one_fifth in south america and europe but, under 10% for the others.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, well, while, after all, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 834.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1801242236 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88410181605 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627329192547 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7350003347 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6666666667 112.824112599 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 5.23603664747 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271295187484 0.215688989381 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112237410904 0.103423049105 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0772293688088 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165625873101 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0746388692885 0.0819641961636 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 61.2550243902 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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