This bar chart illustrates the propotion of various age groups of australian males and females who did their physical exercise regulerly in 2010. First of all, despite of the first age group (15_24) it can be seen that, women were more active than men among all age groups.
To begin, 47.7 per cent was the rate of physical activity done by female between 15_ 24 years old, and it was lower than male's percentage of same age group, which was 52.8%. In contrast, in age group from 25 up to 64 years old, the percentage of females were higher in compare to males. But, there was significant differiences in percentage of both sex, among young adult group, which was 52.5% for females while, 39.5% in males.
Moving to, the last group, 65 years old and over: the percentage of Both, men and women were similarly close to each other at 46.7% and 47.1% respectively.
- The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, similarly, while, in contrast, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62337662338 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33787877786 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 19.6977156036 43.030603864 46% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 118.666666667 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6666666667 22.9334400587 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 5.23603664747 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3070049363 0.215688989381 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152513495159 0.103423049105 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0933314235713 0.0843802449381 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203912910388 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109054517748 0.0819641961636 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.2329268293 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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