The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

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The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purpose in six areas of the world.

The pie charts compares information about the proportion of water usage for distinguishes aim in five continents in the global.
Overall, it is certain that water is used agricultural is most big than other fields, while the smallest water usage occur in domestic use at the Central Asia and South East Asia.
Firstly, for industrial field, the figure of most high is in the Europe and North America by 53 percent, 48 percent respectively. Furthermore, the proportion of agricultural water is generally large which mean from 71 percent to 88 percent.
The percentage of domestic usage is by 19 percent in the South America, as well as in the Europe is less by 4 percent.
Secondly, most low rate for industrial usage has Central Asia with 5 percent which compare with Europe almost less eleven times and it has more by 2 percent to Africa. The Smallest figure of agricultural happen to Europe with 32 percent, subsequent small rate was more by 7 percent in the North America while commonly, the proportion of domestic water usage was lowest than other usages - Both Africa and South Asia were similar with 7 percent which compare with South America - that was the biggest rate for domestic use - approximately more two time.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, second, secondly, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 208.0 196.424390244 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91346153846 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69579525465 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495192307692 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 325.8 283.868780488 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.4167039136 43.030603864 208% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7142857143 22.9334400587 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 5.23603664747 202% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108180946715 0.215688989381 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649693542531 0.103423049105 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399377931876 0.0843802449381 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791576823921 0.15604864568 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394087123125 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.2329268293 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 61.2550243902 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.3012195122 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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