Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices .
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
As globalization is increasing, people would face plenty kind of chance during their life. I completely agree that we have lot of chance that would lead to perspective successful future.
It is evident that there are so many choice for all people. On the one hand, having kind of choice is positive because human should choose one of the most significant way that impact them. For example, when high school students graduate school, they need to make choice whether they continue their studies or a getting to job. If they decide to study at university, they would again connect what kind of field should opt etc. By this way, every single person could be able to connect to opt choice since early age. Furthermore, people would have well opportunities by having so many choice.
On the other hand, there are may have some drawback to have much more choice because people likely to be difficult to make right choice due to having lot of choice. For instance, in my opinion, i have been encountering with this problem since birth my girl because i want to choose better kinder garden or school, but there are lot of kinder garden school. As a result, i do not know how to choose convenient nursery school. I think it is may be occur all people. That is why being many choice is hard.
In conclusion, I absolutely go along with having many choice. although it seems to me tricky to belong fitting choice, being lot of choice is benefit than lack of chance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 579, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun choice seems to be countable; consider using: 'many choices'.
Suggestion: many choices
...ld have well opportunities by having so many choice. On the other hand, there are may h...
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Line 5, column 266, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...his problem since birth my girl because i want to choose better kinder garden or ...
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Line 5, column 283, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... birth my girl because i want to choose better kinder garden or school, but there are ...
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Line 5, column 371, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t of kinder garden school. As a result, i do not know how to choose convenient nu...
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Line 5, column 483, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun choice seems to be countable; consider using: 'many choices'.
Suggestion: many choices
... be occur all people. That is why being many choice is hard. In conclusion, I absolutel...
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Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun choice seems to be countable; consider using: 'many choices'.
Suggestion: many choices
...sion, I absolutely go along with having many choice. although it seems to me tricky to belo...
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Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
...utely go along with having many choice. although it seems to me tricky to belong fitting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65250965251 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40641847318 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.5882612935 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2666666667 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227150169703 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780924069299 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530959746352 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129493094896 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0299300423376 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 78.4519038076 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.