The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write about 150 words.
The bar chart represents why Americans travelled in 2009, while the pie chart conveys data regarding the main issues facing people who travel.
Overall, it is clear that the majority of trips taken in 2009 stemmed from commuting to and from the workplace. Meanwhile, the most common issue among travellers is the high price of travel.
In 2009, nearly half of all trips of people in the US were commutes, whereas almost one in five trips were for personal reasons. 16% of all trips were for shopping, and one out of ten trips were for social or recreational purposes. The least common reason for travel among Americans in 2009 proved to be friend or family visits, causing only 6% of trips.
At 36%, the high cost of travelling emerged as the most popular problem among travellers, as common as the next two popular issues, concerns about safety and hot-tempered drivers, combined. Highway congestion was also a significant cause for concern, as noted by 14% of the general public. Access for public transport users and pedestrians saw the least attention, also totalling 14%.
- The table below shows the results of a 20 year study into why adults in the UK attend arts events Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011. 73
- Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society They think that there is very little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 79
- The chart shows the percentage of male and female teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010 52
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams like football while other people think that taking part in individual sports like tennis or swimming is better Discuss both views and give your own opinion 80
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 275, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...use for concern, as noted by 14% of the general public. Access for public transport users and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, regarding, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 182.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03296703297 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53786682534 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.547539520022 117% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.8652987458 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.777777778 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256289556291 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102326049764 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570132925668 0.0843802449381 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149544483588 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437946011011 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.