The given two charts provide information about what travelers travel for and statistic the significant problems of its public services and people themselves in America in 2009.
Overall, it is clear that the American travels to and from work occupy the highest percentage among the reasons in the first chart, and the troubles in the pie chart appear to focus on the price of travel.
Looking more closely at the bar chart, up to 49% of the trips made in the US is for the occupations. On the contrary, visiting friends or relatives only accounts for 4% of the chart. One in ten of total trips is for social and recreation and the remaining two parts are shopping (16%) and personal reasons (19%)
According to the data in the pie chart, the most worrying issue for American in 2009 is the price which has the biggest proportion in the pie chart, besides the statistics show that walkers have the least number of the chart, illustrated by their disagreement proportion of the chart. Almost one-fifth people of the chart cited safety as their priority (19%), followed the matters of aggressive drivers(17%) and highway congestion (14%).
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, so, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85051546392 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5769948249 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 22.4926829268 142% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 109.205718206 43.030603864 254% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 156.833333333 112.824112599 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3333333333 22.9334400587 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 5.23603664747 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417675337171 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185272973461 0.103423049105 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882660354163 0.0843802449381 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233781431232 0.15604864568 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490423733067 0.0819641961636 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.92 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.9970731707 135% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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