The world today has advanced thanks to greatest technology of all time: The Internet. It made the world become smaller and lots of information that people have has also become part of it. By making use of it, we can conduct meetings, discussion or even learning and training online. So why are people are so fond of doing those activites online instead of doing that in the real world?
First of all, people hates being late for an important meeting just because of the traffic jams, bad weather,… but thanks to today tech we can finally solve that problem, we can now hold a meeting online. We can stay at home with a stable wifi connection to attend the meeting. In addition, by using the Internet you can join in a discussion at any time when one is available. The time and space is no longer an issue for those who use the Internet. The fact is that lots of company and corporation have put those methods in use nowadays like Google, Facebook, Apple, etc… . Students can even attend courses online without traveling far away from home to class to learn. Those courses can be learned at any time without limits.
There are two sides to every coin. The first main problem is that we need a stable connection. Without internet connection, the whole point of doing those stuff online is pointless. The next problem is the online security. We won’t know that if there are hackers that try to steal the company information or so. People have been working on solving those problems lately to make the internet a better place.
In conclusion, we can’t deny the fact that that business meetings, discussions and training are happening online nowadays because the internet holds lots of merits in it which only makes it irreplaceable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 37, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'to the greatest'.
Suggestion: to the greatest
The world today has advanced thanks to greatest technology of all time: The Internet. I...
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Line 2, column 109, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...because of the traffic jams, bad weather,… but thanks to today tech we can finally...
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Line 2, column 573, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...days like Google, Facebook, Apple, etc… . Students can even attend courses online...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1443.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74671052632 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48499933895 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552631578947 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.4434936059 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1666666667 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.16666666667 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120235150863 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403248460784 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622417670531 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105094992976 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.075544368566 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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