The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster University

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The charts below show the result of surveys asking undergraduates and postgraduates why they chose Vaster University.

The two pie charts conclude a survey of undergraduates and postgraduates’ decision to choose Vaster University.

Overall, reputation and cost were the most significant reasons for undergraduates at Vaster University, while these two factors being even more highly regarded by postgraduate students.

Turning to the first chart, we can observe that undergraduates’ most decisive factor is the reputation of university, being 30% of the total. Cost comes as the second most feature, practiced by almost a quarter of undergraduates. Cost is followed by availability of accommodation, which is exercised by 20%. Location and others are less preferable reasons, chosen by 10% and 7% of undergraduates respectively.

Taking a closer look at the second chart, we can see that reputation and cost mattered more to postgraduates than to undergraduates. In contrast to the undergraduates’ preference, the availability of accommodation contributed the least factor to all postgraduates, which made up only 3%. Personal recommendation is roughly third less than that of undergraduates(7%).

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, second, so, third, while, in contrast, in contrast to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 933.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.83125 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.92149026997 2.65546596893 148% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6945201037 43.030603864 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161312369219 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672200564987 0.103423049105 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786362784131 0.0843802449381 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125745241336 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0823397297872 0.0819641961636 100% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 61.2550243902 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.24 11.4140731707 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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