The charts below show the results of a survey about what people of different age groups say makes them most happy.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided pie chart demonstrates what factors make people happy most in below and above age 30. As it illustrates, there were several similarity between what makes young and old people happy. However the were some striking differences.
First of all lets look at the similarities. It is noticable that for both younger and older people, the highest proportion says that achievement at work brings them most happiness. 31% for the younger age and 32% for the older group. Following that, doing hobbies is the second largest percentage for both group. 22% for the group aged below 30 and 24% for the group aged above 30. Thirdly, the differences between two groups. Cretan amount of proportion of younger group prefer to have a good appearance. This takes 18% for the younger people. Simultaneously, the older people put matters for financial security. 20% is how much serious people above aged 30 consider about. Finally, spend times with families or traveling and other factors were the rest things makes both group happy the most. It take approximately 24 to 29 percentages for them to decides.
In conclude, the different between two groups were not far. Thus younger group prefer more indepent field to do while group above aged 30 choose to spend time with their families.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, look, second, so, third, thirdly, thus, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99065420561 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57579656103 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 106.607317073 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607476635514 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 315.9 283.868780488 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 8.94146341463 190% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8591616488 43.030603864 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8235294118 112.824112599 56% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5882352941 22.9334400587 55% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.17647058824 5.23603664747 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225394581537 0.215688989381 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724485720426 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06504164391 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167820699615 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0657932482599 0.0819641961636 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.77 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.