Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Climate change is the greatest threat to the world. Some people, however, agree that people need to find a way to live with it. I completely disagree with this opinion because we still have time to tackle this situation in order to prevent them to reduce the damage on Earth.
On the first hand, some people think that we need to be adapt to climate change. The reason why they say is that they can not see any possible solution to prevent the cause and they have spent too much time and money to find a solution and the outcome which is nothing. This is unacceptable because, despite climate change, some country still have a good solution which already success. For example, the people in Norway have been replaced plastic straw into glass straw. That was an action to prevent the damage that plastic has caused for a century.
On the other hand, people who agree that we need to come up with a plan to reduce climate change on Earth. The effect of climate change has now become more essential than ever. For certain groups of people, this is the right time to come up with a plan to reduce the cost that climate change has caused. This is a good thought because Earth is not on the cliff of destruction, people still can come up with a solution. For example, in the cities, they can plant more tree in order to reduce the smoke that exhausts from cars and buildings. People can switch plastic bags to fabric bags. By doing one of the solutions above, it can make a huge change to the environment of Earth in the future, therefore eliminate climate change.
To sum up, I agree with the opinion to prevent climate change because to have a better future without climate change, we need to prevent it from now by doing every small action. .
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, therefore, for example, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47798742138 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1690252991 2.80592935109 77% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459119496855 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4984085335 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1875 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338220081519 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120730466698 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122605305376 0.0667982634062 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.239054462372 0.151304729494 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0757873466451 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.7 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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