The given line graph illustrates the proportions of population by age group in Japan in the period of 80 years, starting in 1960.
It is obvious that, while the rate of 0-14 and 15-64 saw a downwand trend in the first 40 years in the century, this figure for the 65+ age group witnessed the opposite.
To begin with 1960, most of Japan’s population fell within 0-14 age group, which made up more than 65 percent. From 1970s onward to 2030, there is a substantial decrease in the percentage of people who are in the 0-14 age bracket by 14 percent and hit its lowest point in the past 70 years, but it is expected to have a slow growth of 2 percent in 2040. Next to this number of 25-64 age group, there is a slight highs and lows during the 40-year period, starting in 1960, at which point a gradual drop was witnessed in the proportion of Japan’s population in this group to more than 10 percent according to the forecast.
Besides, In spite of occupying 8 percent in 1960, next 50 years saw an ascending trend to 33 percent of Japan’s population and even was predicted to reach a peak of approximately 40 percent so that it will turn Japan into an aged population country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, so, while, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 218.0 196.424390244 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43577981651 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51808123445 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55504587156 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.45097560976 83% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 22.4926829268 160% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.70471799 43.030603864 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.166666667 112.824112599 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.3333333333 22.9334400587 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 5.23603664747 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0977963373957 0.215688989381 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600406312121 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024000901782 0.0843802449381 28% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0623768139803 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029426948726 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.2329268293 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.78 61.2550243902 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.9970731707 149% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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