Some people hold a belief that the modern-day individuals favor utilize internet for something which is fundamental to life such as working, connecting with friend over communicate in hand. In spite of it’s convenience, people will lose the profound connect with community, society and even prevent people from deep relationships.
It is understandable why some have a tendency to strongly depend on Internet for working, shopping and connecting because it can helps them save many time. People only need to flake out on the sofa to shop, buy some things what you need online or contact with other people via a numer of social media platforms such as Facebook, Zalo and so on in order to build great camaraderies. Even, through Skype, Zoom or Google Meet, a company’s management can easily give a task for his employees easily and make a discussion when laborer is in trouble. As demonstrated, the ability to take the advantages of internet in our lief has numberous benefits and has significantly impact on how people live.
Despite its benefits, there are also negative consequences of the use of Internet. To begin with, with the lack of communtication in person can cause to the deep of a good and meaningful relationship, which is essential for human life. Furthermore, when people rely heavily on technology, they will lose the conncetion with the society and gradually isolated from the world, more serious is that it can result in autism, that’s so dangerous. My friend, for instance, is a smartphone fiend that he virtually left, he gradually lose himself control and become autism, after that, he is put on hospital to cure this dangerous illness. Therefore, balancing online and offline interactions is vital to maintain healthy relationships and social connections in today's digital age.
In conclusion, there are some advantages of using internet, lack of communication in-person interactions, but the drawbacks outweighs the benefits. Therefore, it is essential to balance using technology to our advantage and maintaining personal connections with others.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 200, Rule ID: ABOUT_ITS_NN[25]
Message: Did you mean 'of its convenience'?
Suggestion: of its convenience
...iend over communicate in hand. In spite of it’s convenience, people will lose the profound connect ...
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'help'
Suggestion: help
... shopping and connecting because it can helps them save many time. People only need t...
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Line 3, column 146, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun time seems to be countable; consider using: 'many times'.
Suggestion: many times
...nnecting because it can helps them save many time. People only need to flake out on the s...
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Line 5, column 527, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[3]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'loses'.
Suggestion: loses
...nd that he virtually left, he gradually lose himself control and become autism, afte...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1758.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29518072289 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05853880182 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60843373494 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.9713890252 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.230769231 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.23076923077 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220541615374 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729573588289 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472276562173 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128572550177 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033862101539 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.