The charts below show what percentage of their daily intake of various nutrients the average person in the USA consumes in each meal and in snacks. These nutrients may be unhealthy if eaten too much.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The combination of pie charts illustrate the information in terms of proportion about three various kinds of nutrition consumed by per person during three course meals and snacks in the America.
It can be clearly seen from the description that dinner attained highest figure for eating sodium with 43%and followed by saturated fat by with 37% by average citizens in one specific region. In contrast, the Americans gave preference to add a little more than a quarter amount of sugar in dinner. Likewise, only 14% sodium is eaten by per person in their breakfast,whereas the consumption of saturated fat and added sugar was remained constant as 16% in first meal among one given nation.
The charts further demonstrate that natives of America is liked to intake 42% proportion of sugar in their snacks,however, this amount is observed for decreasing trend of two folds in sugar and saturated fat between snacks eaten by average natives in the USA. At last, the percentum of three types of nutrients involved in lunch according to average person in the America is 29%,26% and 19% respectively.
Hence, it is vivid that sodium and saturated fat constituted major to consumed by per person in dinner and sugar in snacks, while least percentage of all given nutrients is eaten in breakfast by Americans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, likewise, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 33.7804878049 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05555555556 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83823106099 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564814814815 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 338.4 283.868780488 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.9375984572 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.0 112.824112599 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8571428571 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20533536381 0.215688989381 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888564359276 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506707278681 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12809915088 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366883777716 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.2329268293 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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