The bar charts present information about choices of graduate and postgraduate studentd who did not choose a full-time job after graduating in UK in 2008. As is shown from the charts, a vast majority of both of them went on further study while the tiny minority were involved in voluntary work, excluding ful time.
Specifically, within thr survey of UK graduates, the largest proportion of them chose to study further, at around 30,000. Only a small number of graduates of 3,500 was engaged in voluntary work. Both of the two choices accounted for about half of the data, and the other half went to part-time job and unemployment, with the number at approximately 17,000 and 16,000 respectively.
Similar to the percentages of the gradutes, postgraduates were surveyed on a smaller basis. The largest number at 2,725 comtinued their study, 2,535 in part-time job and 1,625 without employment. In addition, voluntary related work just received 345 postgraduates.
Overall, excluding full-time work, both graduates and postgraduates were pursuing higher education in 2008.
- Some people believe that unpaid community service be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children)To what extent do you agree or disagree? 61
- The diagrams below show the site of a school in 2004 and the plan for changes to the school site in 2024.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 67
- The diagram below show the stages and equipment used in the cement making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purpose. 78
- Many people decide on a career path early in their lives and keep to it. This, they argue, leads to a more satisfying working life. To what extent do you agree with this view? What other things can people do in order to have a satisfying working life? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...te and postgraduate studentd who did not choose a full-time job after graduating ...
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...UK in 2008. As is shown from the charts, a vast majority of both of them went on ...
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...inority were involved in voluntary work, excluding ful time. Specifically, with...
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...ork, excluding ful time. Specifically, within thr survey of UK graduates, the ...
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...o study further, at around 30,000. Only a small number of graduates of 3,500 was engaged in volun...
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...es accounted for about half of the data, and the other half went to part-time job...
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... went to part-time job and unemployment, with the number at approximately 17,000 ...
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...d 1,625 without employment. In addition, voluntary related work just received 345...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 904.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31764705882 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02776082941 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629411764706 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.574603044 43.030603864 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.444444444 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.44444444444 5.23603664747 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242536868856 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101042808901 0.103423049105 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121448859869 0.0843802449381 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162897108511 0.15604864568 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106956402403 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.2329268293 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.