The provided bar chart depicts the graduates and postgraduate students in UK who did not participate into full-time work after leaving college in 2008. Overall it is clearly evident that a great number of graduates and post graduates attended for further study and this option was their priority in given period.
To begin with, a greatest number of graduates and post graduates preferred to opt further study and this option dedicated a number of 29665 and 2725 students respectively to it self, however graduates had overtaken post graduates by a wide margine. Followed by, second favorite job for graduates was part-time work and accounted 17735 students which is higher than postgraduates (2535 students).
Nevertheless, the least interesting choice for both graduates and postgraduates was voluntary work compared to other criteria's, while the result is under 5000 for graduates and below 500 students for postgraduates. Unemployment came after part-time work and the char demonstrates a number of 16235 for graduates and 1625 for postgraduates.
To sum up, not only further study was popular among graduates but also it was as well as postgraduates prior decision.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 16, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...iority in given period. To begin with, a greatest number of graduates and post g...
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Line 2, column 175, Rule ID: IT_SELF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'itself'?
Suggestion: itself
...29665 and 2725 students respectively to it self, however graduates had overtaken post g...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, nevertheless, second, so, well, while, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 988.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 184.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36956521739 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01545718616 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4646156041 43.030603864 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.142857143 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 22.9334400587 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5714285714 5.23603664747 259% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241499641377 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138296035988 0.103423049105 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147726978225 0.0843802449381 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155126886206 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106616457422 0.0819641961636 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.