The charts below shows the value of one country s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016 The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main
The chart depicts, the exports earning of a country in billions in various 5 categories in the year 2015 and 2016. Whereas, the table enumerates, the percentage change in each product in 2016 comparison to 2015.
A glance at the chart reveals that, the petroleum product is the highest exported product in both year and textile is the highest revenue earning product in 2016. However, the export earning is soared than 2015 in every product comparison to 2016, except in gems and jewellery.
In details, petroleum and engineered goods are the largest revenue earning product in both year. As shown in the chart, petroleum uplifted by almost 3 billion in 2016 and reached to 63 billion and engineered goods reached to around 61 billion in 2016. Similarly, agricultural product is the least revenue earning of a country, soared by tiny portion, whereas, textile climbed from 27 billion to 32 billion approximately. Only jewellery product declined from around 43 billion to 40 billion.
As the table outlines, textile is the highest percentage of revenue earning product , soared by 15.24%, whereas, engineered and petroleum product revenue percentage id 8.5% and 3% respectively. With 0.81%, agriculture product remains lowest revenue earning in 2016, where, jewellery product dropped by 5.18%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, similarly, so, well, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 206.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29611650485 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75476711556 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47572815534 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 310.5 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.918288151 43.030603864 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184098102609 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109891595595 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.119474161945 0.0843802449381 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178527314967 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165548164263 0.0819641961636 202% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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