The given chart shows that the number of export earnings in one country based on the product category in two years from 2015 to 2016 in billions of dollars.
It is clear from the chart that in both of these years petroleum products bring the maximum income into the country. Furthermore, textiles have the sharpest increase from 2015 to 2016.
According to the chart, agricultural exports have the slightest change and they only increase by %0.81, they almost bring 30 billion dollars to the country. Also, engineered goods and petroleum products increase by %8.5 and %3, respectively. These two are the two most valuable exports in the country.
It is apparent that between these five products that only gems and jewelry show a decrease of %5.18. Moreover, textiles despite its sharp increase of %15.24, still bring the least export earnings in 2015-2016.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 50, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'years'' or 'year's'?
Suggestion: years'; year's
...ar from the chart that in both of these years petroleum products bring the maximum in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, moreover, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 718.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 142.0 196.424390244 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.45201032557 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48371006987 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584507042254 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 198.0 283.868780488 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.193383863 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240285337117 0.215688989381 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103727097525 0.103423049105 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100621484398 0.0843802449381 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16676995042 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103383268273 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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