People in their entire lives, confront with different circumstances. Although many would believe that the best way under a hard situation is to accept it, I strongly argue that people should fight for the better which they deserve.
On the one hand, many would say when one is unsatisfied with their situation, acceptance prevents desperation and frustration. Trying and overthinking about that situation, eventually leads to more serious actions like suicidal attempts in some cases. Moreover, many people have no choice other than standing by their unsatisfactory job. For instance, many single mothers are paid less than other people, but in order to pay for their living expenses, they have to stay at that job. Also, many graduate students do not find a job in their field and they should pay bills and rent, so they are obligated to do some ordinary jobs.
On the other hand, I believe that people should try to improve their lives. First of all, It is a common phrase that says: " if life gives you lemons, make the best lemonade out of it." Secondly, people can stay at their minimum wage jobs or struggle with financial issues, but in their free time, they can learn new practical skills to improve in their jobs and make up for their money shortage. It may seem hard but hard work pays off eventually.
In conclusion, there are some views about what is the best way for people to act in difficult situations, but I suggest that trying to improve these circumstances is the best way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1251.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83011583012 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51999058706 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590733590734 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0607128941 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.727272727 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5454545455 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1818181818 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218011378143 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0896413749267 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649743874303 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147003133527 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385726084921 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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