The charts show the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry (CN) and services in three countries in 1980 and the
projections of distribution in 2020.
The graphs illustrated the recruitment of three countries in three categories in 1980 and its plan for the year 2020.
Overall, the business of agriculture in country B was the highest among three fields, which is predicted to maintain its position in 2020.
Firstly, the occupation for agriculture in country C started with nearly 70% which was about 30% higher than that of this country’s industry in 1980. In the same year, the service-related jobs accounted for only 30%. A considerable fall of 30% is predicted in the agriculture jobs in 2020. The industrial jobs will also experience a 10% drop. The firgure for services is the only category which see a slight increase of nearly 5%.
On the other hand, the statistics for agriculture in 2 countries A and C in 1980 was very low at about nearly 20%. In the same year, the service-related of country C jobs occupied 40% nearly doubled that of country B. Slight decreases of about 8% and 5% are predicted in the agriculture in country A and C. The firgure for services in country A began at 20% the will rise dramatically to 40% in 2020 and become the top of the list. That statistic of country C started at 40% in 1980 and will plunge to 60%in 2020.
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- Some people believe the it is illegal to keep animals in captivity. Other think that this benefits both animals and humans. Discuss both views and give your opinion 61
- The charts show the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry (CN) and services in three countries in 1980 and the projections of distribution in 2020. 56
- the charts below shows the distribution of employment in agriculture, industry, and services in three countries in 1980 and the projections of distribution in 2020 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 999.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.625 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89182172471 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.547539520022 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.33902439024 230% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3554604044 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.25 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.58333333333 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211950946991 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923914831399 0.103423049105 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046303817591 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149743822036 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355682669344 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 11.4140731707 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.8 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.