Some people believe the it is illegal to keep animals in captivity. Other think that this benefits both animals and humans. Discuss both views and give your opinion
In this era, keeping animals in captivity is in major concern. some people consider that this is against the law, while other believe that it is beneficial for both the wild life and human society. this essay is going to analyse both view.
On the one hand,the advocates for keeping animals in a man-made habitat are numerous. Firstly, visitors can visit and expand their knowledge about wild life more often. For instance, when the elephants are kept in a zoo, people can buy tickets to enter the zoo, and watch how they live there. Through that way , the audience can understand the lifestyle of that species. that kind of knowledge may be very useful for some students or scientists because it assists them to complete their researches on ecosystem.An other benefit is that keeping animals in captivity also provides them with the system of health care. Thanks to the advanced technology, doctors and nurses can improve the health of the caged animals constantly,which can extend the longevity of the animals.
On the other hand, the keeping animals is obviously illegal. this activity may lead to a considerable decrease in the variety of species. Simply put, a particular animal living in an artificial environment may suffer the loss of some nessecary characterisitics that its true habitat has. this may seriously affect its ability to have babies or also make it infertile, which can later leads to an extintion. For instance, a huge turtle which was catched in Vietnam and brought to zoos was dead due to the lack of mud in water. And this species is now on the verge of extinction.
In conclusion, the pros and cons of keeping animals in captivity are undeniable.However, this thing seems to be illegal rather than beneficial for the mentioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96296296296 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78982398684 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558922558923 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6120973586 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.125 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274141177574 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0910652743796 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0777952647993 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184063210885 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10054070413 0.056905535591 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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