The charts show how tourism to the two countries changed over a 50-year period.
The given chart presents information about tourism changed during 50 years in 2 countries – Australia and Germany. As can be seen from the diagram below, the situation is quite changeable in both countries.
During 1960, Australia has received more tourists from European countries (53%) rather than Asia, Britain, and the USA, as well as Germany, had also a high percentage of getting European tourists (45%). The percentage of tourists visiting from Asia to Australia was increasing rapidly and considerably (63%) at the 2010s, followed by the tourist from Britain (20%), Europe (10%) and USA (7%).
In comparison to Australia, Germany`s touristic statistics has not changed a lot, the indicator in 2010 was almost the same as the 1960s according to the chart. As is presented in the pie, statistics decreased slightly; therefore the percentage of tourists from Europe was 40%. On the other hand, visitors from Asia to Germany were risen up and the indicators changed sharply (from 10% to 25%).
- Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole.Discuss this view and give your own opinion. 67
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinions 84
- Some people think that universities should not provide so much theoretical but give more practical training throughout their courses 71
- In many countries very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV What do you think are the causes of this What solutions can you suggest 53
- Nowadays most parents put a lot of pressure on their children to succeed. What other reason for parents to do this?Does it have a positive or a negative effect on children? 35
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 138, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ritain, and the USA, as well as Germany, had also a high percentage of getting Eu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, therefore, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 835.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15432098765 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80477959906 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635802469136 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8255933226 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.285714286 112.824112599 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11596095579 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697788744864 0.103423049105 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113030496645 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104766760456 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0929069302326 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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