The charts show the sources of electricity produced in 4 countries between 2003 aand 2008.
The given pie charts demonstrate about the proportion of three different sources of electricity in 4 countries namely India, Sweden, Morocco and Vietnam in two years 2003 and 2008.
Overall, Morocco and Vietnam did not use nuclear power for electricity generation. it can also be seen that while the fossil fuels were the largest source of electricity in Vietnam and India, the figure was a relatively marginal share in Morocco and Sweden over the period in questions.
In Vietnam, 56% of the total amount of electricity was produced from fossil fuels, whereas
Morocco witnessed a lower proportion of 5%. The rest of electricity, in both nations, was solely from hydro energy (44% for the former and 95% for the latter.)
In contrast, in India electricity from fossil comprised of 82%, which was the highest figure for fossil fuel use among 4 countries. Meanwhile, this energy used to produce electricity in Sweden only occupied 4%, with hydro power and nuclear power contributing to 52% and 44% respectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 166.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15060240964 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58944267634 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75562081453 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6579666071 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7142857143 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 5.23603664747 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181782309123 0.215688989381 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.086878089427 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0825264115997 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109428876022 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0913845998985 0.0819641961636 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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