The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.

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The charts show survey results concerning why MBA graduates did their degree, and employer's reasons for hiring them.

The pie chart delineates the reasons of doing MBA and which types of employee hire by employers. Unit is measured in fraction.

As an overall assessment, it is unequivocal that majority of students doing MBA for better job opportunity while employee can hire employer based on personality as well as previous experience.

In the preliminary stage, it is astoundingly that most of the students take MBA course due to better job opportunity in the future but some students only take this course for the ability to help other which is least percentage in the graph. 15% of students doing MBA for personal development and ability to do job better follow this trend. When employee can hire employer at that time they focus on personality as well as past experience, both have same proportion which is 25%. Only 10% of employers hired by employee as a base on qualification while 20% of interviewer consider as appearance and previous experience connection.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 208, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the least'.
Suggestion: is the least
...rse for the ability to help other which is least percentage in the graph. 15% of student...
^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...me they focus on personality as well as past experience, both have same proportion which is 25%...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.97073170732 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03144654088 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94167557082 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572327044025 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.956937043 43.030603864 149% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150874184914 0.215688989381 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0754102545454 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513378944788 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123430728484 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200598002707 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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