Some people believe that giving longer prison sentences is the best way to reduce crime. Others believe that there are better ways to reduce crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is irrefutable, in recent time misdeed activity has been witnessing across the globe by which section of the society believe that criminal should be sent to the jail to the long lime of period for reducing this activity. while other averse that there are other many ways to preventing crime. Both views will be analysed in the following paragraphs.
To commence, discussing the former view, the first and foremost one is that long prison can create fear about punishment by which people cannot attempt illegal activities which leads to the negative impact on society as well as culture. As a ramification, they cannot take any chance related to offending which have the worst time during their journey of life. For instance, the punishment of murder which has approximately 20 years, after complete their punishment they may not commit crim due to a long time of period. Moreover, if the government make stringent rules and regulation on committing a crime then the ration of vandalizing action would be dwindling.
Conversely, there are innumerable ways through misdeed activity can be reduced. The noteworthy step is that the law enforcement authority should provide better education for people by which they learn the social, ethical and moral value of the society. As a consequence, they try to make a clean image in front of the people and they get a good job with handsome salary. In addition to this, rehabilitation program should conduct in prison where the offender learns the importance of the relation between individuals.
In the final analysis, the reflection exhibited with above statement leads to firmly assert that government should work on improvement of literacy rates. If they will act judiciously then the ratio of crime will be decreased in the years to come.
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Suggestion: While
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11224489796 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75217783843 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8444182897 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.615384615 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6153846154 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14834425053 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524263111253 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538673710205 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0893377181631 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651340437371 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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