The civic centre will be planned to change there are two maps one is the existing and the other is the plan for now

Essay topics:

The civic centre will be planned to change. there are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for now

The plan shows future changes made to a civic center, which is between of the Smith street and a high street.
It can be clearly seen that some places will be moved to underground; on the other hand, the others will be relocated and remain the same position, compared to the originally plan.
Looking at the future plan, on the top corners, a café and hotel restaurant will replace the two former car parks, which will be moved to the underground of the former town hall at the right bottom of the center. Moreover, a library, which is previously on the right bottom corner, is going to be relocated to underground and situated next to the future car park.
On the other hand, the cinema and the shopping center will stay the same position on top and right end of the plan, respectively. However, prior to relocating to the left bottom corner, the council offices are between the town hall and the exhibition, which is previously on the left corner. Consequently, the exhibition is going to be moved to right bottom corner instead.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, look, moreover, so, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 1.00243902439 599% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 183.0 196.424390244 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67213114754 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54224658664 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48087431694 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0032353129 43.030603864 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 5.23603664747 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243075953281 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116162229464 0.103423049105 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0873760736592 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16337511063 0.15604864568 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062777766473 0.0819641961636 77% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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