The civic centre will be planned to change. There are two maps: one is the existing and the other is the plan for new. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and compare the two maps
The two maps illustrate the current construction of the civic center as well as the plan for renovation in the future. Overall, it can be seen that, according to the plans, the layout will be preserved with few alterations in many locations in this building.
Looking at the first diagram, the civic center is surrounded by 2 streets on both the left and right-hand sides and 2 avenues on the northern and southern sides of the building. On the top, a concert hall stands between the car parks on the west and another car park on the east, and the shopping center is next to this. Located opposite the concert hall on the southern side is the council office at the center, nearly adjoining an exhibition hall situated to the west and a library to the east.
Turning to the planned idea of re-designing the civic center, this building will still encircle by these streets and avenues which was remained before in this essay. The car park in the top-left corner will be demolished and replaced by a theatre. Similarly, the other car parks in the upper right corner will be converted into an area for hotel and restaurant purposes. The concert hall, together with the shopping center, will be on the same territory as today. On the southern side, the library will be removed, and the
exhibition hall will take its place. Besides, the council office will be shifted from the lower middle area to the lower-left corner and relocated to the previous location of the exhibition hall. Finally, the former location of the council will become a larger place that consists of two floors, the basement for a contemporary car park and the first floor for a park.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, if, look, similarly, so, still, well, as to, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 1.00243902439 998% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1368.0 965.302439024 142% => OK
No of words: 290.0 196.424390244 148% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71724137931 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50435055461 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 106.607317073 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.486206896552 0.547539520022 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 411.3 283.868780488 145% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 11.0 4.33902439024 254% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8467612136 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 5.23603664747 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176307304334 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0763229173118 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701561650762 0.0843802449381 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125842276794 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808626626777 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 40.7170731707 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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