The daigrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the cancrete for building purposes?

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The daigrams show the stages and equipment used in the process of cement making and how cement is used to produce the cancrete for building purposes?

The given flow diagram depicts the information about the process of cement and concrete production by some equipments and material.which is clearly and coherently represented.
As it is crystal clear from the diagram.There are four steps in the manufacturing of cement (crusher,mixer,rotating heater,grinder).The first step is crush both the material limestone and clay and mix it,with the help of mixer.However,we gain the mixture in the form of powder.Afrer that,it is in the rotating heater tube,heat is introduced from the end of tube before the mixture is actually drop on the grinder.At last, we gain the cement and packed in the bags.
As far as trend is concerned that there are five steps of the concrete production.Firstly, we need cement 15%,water10%,sand 25% and gravel 50%, and then all the materials throw into the concrete mixer.At last, all the mixture rotate in the anti clock wise direction to concrete mixture.
Overall, it is evident that the steps of making cement are more complicated and require advance machinery while concrete production mixing of components in right propotion in machine.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... is clearly and coherently represented. As it is crystal clear from the diagram.Th...
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...As it is crystal clear from the diagram.There are four steps in the manufacturing of ...
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Suggestion: , mixer
...s in the manufacturing of cement crusher,mixer,rotating heater,grinder.The first step ...
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... of cement crusher,mixer,rotating heater,grinder.The first step is crush both the materi...
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...t crusher,mixer,rotating heater,grinder.The first step is crush both the material l...
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...e material limestone and clay and mix it,with the help of mixer.However,we gain the m...
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... clay and mix it,with the help of mixer.However,we gain the mixture in the form of powd...
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...nd mix it,with the help of mixer.However,we gain the mixture in the form of powder....
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... gain the mixture in the form of powder.Afrer that,it is in the rotating heater tube,...
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...mixture in the form of powder.Afrer that,it is in the rotating heater tube,heat is ...
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...r that,it is in the rotating heater tube,heat is introduced from the end of tube befo...
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... of tube before the mixture is actually drop on the grinder.At last, we gain the cem...
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...mixture is actually drop on the grinder.At last, we gain the cement and packed in ...
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...gain the cement and packed in the bags. As far as trend is concerned that there ar...
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...e five steps of the concrete production.Firstly, we need cement 15%,water10%,sand 25% a...
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...materials throw into the concrete mixer.At last, all the mixture rotate in the ant...
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...ck wise direction to concrete mixture. Overall, it is evident that the steps of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, firstly, however, so, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34090909091 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.54951326543 2.65546596893 134% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.4926829268 196% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.69896283 43.030603864 269% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 235.0 112.824112599 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 44.0 22.9334400587 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 5.23603664747 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112413454375 0.215688989381 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762170794395 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0333897157094 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762170794395 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0333897157094 0.0819641961636 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.2329268293 194% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 61.2550243902 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 10.3012195122 199% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.58 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.06136585366 125% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 11.4329268293 267% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.6 10.9970731707 178% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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