Diagram about the production of deep-fried salted peanuts.
The diagram illustrates the process of deep fried salted peanuts manufacture and preparation for sale on the market.
Overall, there are 8 stages in the production of deep fried salted peanuts. The process begins with the harvesting of peanuts, and ends at the packing delivery to small traders’ stage.
Looking at first stages of the process, peanuts must first be harvested in the fields and then mature pods are dug up from the plants. At the next step of the process, beans are taken out from the pods, removing shells, and they are collected in the containers which are delivered to store.
At the 5th stage, oil is heated in a large saucepan to 90 degrees C. Next, peanuts are fried in preheated oil until fragrant and hot, about 5 minutes. After that, the salt is sprinkled over the peanuts and stirred just a few times and kept them to cool down on a cooling tray. When it cools completely, they are kept in different sizes of packages according to the weight (100g, 250g, 500g, 1000g). Finally, deep fried salted snack packets are transported to shops and small traders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: peanuts'; peanut's
...trates the process of deep fried salted peanuts manufacture and preparation for sale on...
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... preparation for sale on the market. Overall, there are 8 stages in the produ...
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...livery to small traders' stage. Looking at first stages of the process, ...
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...ainers which are delivered to store. At the 5th stage, oil is heated in a lar...
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...transported to shops and small traders.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, look, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 938.0 965.302439024 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83505154639 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45882232092 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8788848484 43.030603864 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.8 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301035018448 0.215688989381 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1187749419 0.103423049105 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16832094271 0.0843802449381 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191465866772 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1250222787 0.0819641961636 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 40.7170731707 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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