sporting and cultural events can help in minimizing the tension among different nations. discuess
Some people are inclined to spend money widely for having tickets to attend some cultural and sporting occasions. According to my knowledge, exposure and experience to make nations as well as world more clam and peace full, sporting events may bring varieties of incredible benefits.
In the first place, I strongly believe that sporting events have magical effects to reduce global tension and they also make people release their patriotic emotions in a safer way: without giving any physical and financial loss .They enjoy the feelings of being victorious and successful. A survey in U.K. has discovered that world becomes ten times more peaceful after arranging international sports events.
In my opinion another significant aspect which can add peace to this world is to invite other international players to participate in local games. Such type of events may result in bringing people closer from different parts of the world. These events may also help to minimize hate for one another. Similarly, nationalism arises when people represent their country and get themselves more recognized.
Furthermore, cultural and sporting occasions are believed to be a cure to ill minded people. It has been observed, the more people have exposure to attend these kinds of gathering, the more they are likely to love cultural diversity which is of great importance to make world more fit to enjoy the real happiness of life.
In conclusion, there are many advantages of sporting events and it is also a positive attitude to justify the peace of the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, may, similarly, so, well, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1305.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17857142857 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66230214921 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607142857143 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 65.4944322913 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.636363636 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9090909091 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193644889092 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746749818407 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0440123684292 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103840898826 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213766123071 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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