The diagram depicts the recycling process of storm water in a particular city in Australia.
Overall, there are five distinct steps to transferring natural water stemming from rain and storms into domestic water. This process begins with storing storm water and ends with distributing recycled water for various purposes.
Initially, water falling on natural phenomena such as rain and storms is collected through the available drainage system under the ground. Following that, non-processed water officially experiences a sorting period within 4 levels to release dust and other harmful ingredients. These consist of plastic rubbish, small particles, bacteria and viruses, and molecules and salt, respectively.
At the third stage, water is then mixed with a small proportion of chlorine (only 4 mg/l) with the view of being cleaner and more crystal. After that, recycled water is transported to chambers for storage before being used for domestic purposes via an underground waterpipe system.
- The table shows the number of mobile phones and personal computers per 1000 people in 2003 in 6 different counties Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- Many historic buildings are being destroyed or replaced What are the reasons for this What should be done to preserve these buildings 84
- The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010 87
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 78
- Some people believe laws change human behavior Do you agree with it 92
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, then, third, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59602649007 4.92477711251 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76600881945 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.701986754967 0.547539520022 128% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 283.868780488 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 17.3691536927 43.030603864 40% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.625 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.23603664747 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0741176563996 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0402873553056 0.103423049105 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669307218779 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0704818882141 0.15604864568 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0782852512138 0.0819641961636 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 61.2550243902 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.49 8.06136585366 130% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 40.7170731707 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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