Along with the rapid rhythm of modern life, shopping is not only simply buying products to meet people's basic requirements but also be regarded as a type of popular recreational pattern. From my personal perspective, I totally agree with this school of though because numerous benefits from purchasing completely outweight the drawbacks of this phenomenon.
Shopping can be misunderstand with negative meaning by some reasons. This is due to the fact that when shopping becomes an intertest, even the luxurious lifestyle, this will exert enormously serious effect on people, especially the young who lack experiences. For example, teenagers nowadays have a tendency to allocate their budget on famous international fashion brands, which can exhaust their accumulated money for more important purposes such as health care and education. Because of unwise consume decisions, people are able to get in debt and have alarmingly financial problems in the near future.
Despite the main reason mentioned above, I strongly believe that the plus points of this trend are likely to bring more benefits for people in general. Firstly, shopping is likely to reduce stress and retain happy feeling for customers who directly or indirectly experiencing this process. This is exactly true in developed industries, including service. In fact, big corporations and enterprises are increasingly paying attention to service's quality to boost sales and revenues. Take retail chain stores as example, working parents can take their children for baby sisters at special areas to spend their time for choosing suitable items for their demands without disturbance stemming from babies. Furthermore, play grounds, designed at malls and supermarkets, are attractive customer destinations, especially at weekends when students are free from books and academic lessons.
In conclusion, shopping is not only the daily normal activity but also a form of entertainment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivity but also a form of entertainment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, as to, for example, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1650.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59322033898 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9043865229 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684745762712 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4010277065 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.923076923 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136479722599 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464593586775 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272567802106 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0801363336469 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00666035986132 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.44 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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