The diagram below gives information about the manufacture of frozen fish pies.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The process shows the process of producing frozen fish pies.
Overall, there are 3 main step in this process.
First of all, the potato is processed. Then they will be mixed with the salmon which re-maked too. The last step is the stage that salmon and potato are mixed to have the last result.
More over, the potato is cleaned after one month. After that, They are peeled as well as released waste. Then they are sliced, boiled, chilled and stored for the last stage. While making potato, they also make the salmon by cover them with lemon juice and salt. Next, they go through the steam oven and their bones as well as their skins are removed by the worker and they will be inspected by an expert.
In the last stage, the remaked salmon is mixed with prepared peas and sauces. Then, they are mixed with prepared potato and become the last result. After that, they are wrapped and freezed so that they will be delivered to the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'steps'?
Suggestion: steps
... fish pies. Overall, there are 3 main step in this process. First of all, the po...
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Line 2, column 27, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'step' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'steps'.
Suggestion: steps
... fish pies. Overall, there are 3 main step in this process. First of all, the po...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, then, well, while, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 5.60731707317 303% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52046783626 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.81691680875 2.65546596893 68% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.543859649123 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.5308144251 43.030603864 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.4615384615 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.1538461538 22.9334400587 57% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0391700415912 0.215688989381 18% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0176202096899 0.103423049105 17% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0279533493792 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0354150485442 0.15604864568 23% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279077345856 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.06136585366 89% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 11.4329268293 39% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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