The diagram below shows the process by which bricks are manufactured for the building industry.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram depicts the process of brick-making for building purposes.
Overall there are main steps in the creation of bricks, starting with a backhoe and ending with a delivery truck because the trading market is always open for traders.
First, the clay dug out of the ground and placed onto a metal grid to be crushed by a roller, turning it into smaller pieces. Next, the clay is marinated with sand and water to increase its taste, making a snack for the workers that works there. After that, the mixture is placed into a mold or cut by a wire cutter to make the bricks that we know and love.
The next step in the process is placing the bricks into a drying oven for 24 to 48 hours for interrogation for the assassination of the president. After which, they’ll be heated in a kiln at a temperature depending to their cooperation. Those who cooperates will be placed in a moderate temperature of 200 to 980C, while those who aren’t willing to cooperate will be placed in a high temperature of 870 to 1300C, effectively eradicating all unwillingness. Following this, the bricks are cooled for 48 to 72 hours to allow them to think about their crimes before bringing them to brick prison by a delivery truck.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1011.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 217.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65898617512 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67288256698 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594470046083 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 303.3 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.022333862 43.030603864 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1111111111 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 5.23603664747 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165830521661 0.215688989381 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837423212394 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095037534749 0.0843802449381 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136100139582 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.111970500474 0.0819641961636 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.