To succeed in a business, one needs to know math.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A considerable majority believes that math plays an important role in the success of a company, or an entrepreneur. I share the same point of view with the crowds.
If we look closer at the history of successful business owners, we’ll find out that most of them were excellent at math when they were students. Bill Gates is an obvious example to prove that. Since he was 8, he had entered lots of mathematics competitions, and he always stayed at the top score students in math at his school. Scientists have proven that those who have superd logical thinking, and problem-solving skills are the one who are good at math. Those are also the crucial qualities that business owners should get a hold of, because logical thinking will help the owners to have a clear, vivid picture of the company's future so they can provide the best strategies for the companies’ development. A leader who obtains wonderful problem-solving skills will be easier while dealing with surprising situations and have better adaptability as well as flexibility. Another reason to support my argument is that a leader who is good at calculation will know how to cut the expenses, minimize the unnecessary outcome and wisely economize the company’s budget. Business owners who are good at math can’t decrease the amount of capitalization fraud who take advantage from their positions.
But on the other hand, an owner who runs an entertainment company, or works in a highly creative environment doesn’t need to know a lot about math. Because each environment has different criterias. Those who work in creativity need a free, imaginative mind, not a rigid, logical brian. Those who work in tourism, or hospitality require a competent communication skill and the ability to understand the customer’s feelings and wishes. Those who work as a cleaner, or a butler need to have meticulous, careful mind and elaborate actions in order to complete their job excently.
To conclude, I believe that mathematics skill is important to business owners, but other fields demand different qualities, that is why the owners of different careers should adapt the flows of that industry.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 149, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... doesn’t need to know a lot about math. Because each environment has different criteria...
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Line 5, column 435, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and the customer’s feelings and wishes. Those who work as a cleaner, or a butler need...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, well, while, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1813.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10704225352 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97329781569 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583098591549 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7089254519 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.3125 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1875 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.107521861234 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341499792287 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.030088927104 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0565309305915 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237002830048 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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