The line graph depicts the situations of parcels delivery of weo dominent mail services companies from the year of 1920 to 2000. The two companies are Federal Expresss and TNT Mail Services.
The delivery of TNT increased over the span. It delived 5000 parcels in the year 1920 and continued increasing till 1960s with 12000 parcels every year. Then TNT undergone a gradual decrease between 1960s and 1980s. After that, a sheer increase can be seen in parcel delivery from 1980 to 1990. It continued a moderate increase from the year 1990 to the end of 20th century. The quantity of delived parcels was approximately 25000 in the year of 2000.
On the contrast, Federal Express showed ups and downs in the period. The parcel delivery increased steady from 15000 in 1920 to 24000 in 1940. It decreased sharply over the span of 1940s to 1950s. A stagnent period followed in the next ten years. A moderate increase can be seen from 1960s to 1980s. But the business remained stagnent in the next 20 years. The delived parcels was about 18000 items in the year of 2000.
As can be found from the diagram, Federal Express delived more parcels than TNT. This trend continued for 70 years. The gep dwindled as time went by and the trend reversed after the year of 1990. TNT delived more parcels than Federal Express after 1990 as the result of that TNT continued increased the quantity of parcels delived whilst Federal Express suffered an unstable business.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...eral Expresss and TNT Mail Services. The delivery of TNT increased over the span...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'then']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.28102189781 0.268076937826 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.113138686131 0.116061578633 97% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0510948905109 0.0759168565197 67% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0182481751825 0.0366838410393 50% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.0109489051095 0.0131127313244 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.156934306569 0.155750635184 101% => OK
Participles: 0.0182481751825 0.0379272487307 48% => Some participles wanted.
Conjunctions: 2.33311736394 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Infinitives: 0.021897810219 0.0210936926555 104% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.131386861314 0.0948980150116 138% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0109489051095 0.00437022459523 251% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.00967000014798 0% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1456.0 1161.00487805 125% => OK
No of words: 252.0 196.9 128% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77777777778 5.90752243213 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 3.73763899035 107% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.333333333333 0.337110787985 99% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.281746031746 0.247514529752 114% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.170634920635 0.171178102325 100% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0674603174603 0.112407865282 60% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.33311736394 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.468253968254 0.546246751206 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 43.0017690628 49.3433353143 87% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 8.93414634146 213% => Less sentences wanted.
Sentence length: 13.2631578947 23.0094962315 58% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9869618149 42.9750493124 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6315789474 135.714022679 56% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.2631578947 23.0094962315 58% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.105263157895 0.689975730869 15% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.84146341463 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 41.4377610693 47.7609492067 87% => OK
Elegance: 3.20512820513 2.94281807926 109% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.414312472641 0.418131533498 99% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.10294315252 0.181151798455 57% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0807869960525 0.0850326197045 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.521267101666 0.706616315825 74% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.180004213063 0.157042692854 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166425587815 0.228904883108 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10596323529 0.108899403657 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.454304078042 0.367819155151 124% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.103747936628 0.0812612215331 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321589372745 0.316326947829 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101736969303 0.0921553760075 110% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70731707317 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 13.0 4.08536585366 318% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 3.16585365854 158% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 11.0 3.02926829268 363% => OK
Total topic words: 17.0 7.1512195122 238% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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