The line graph depicts the information about the number of parcels were delivering by two main service named as FedEx and TNT services companies between 1920 and 2000.
With regards to FedEx company, it began at around 15000 number of parcels delivered in 1920 then peaked at 25000 before decreasing dramatically to approximately 11000 number of parcels delivers in 1980 while last one decade remained stable at approximately 18000 parcels was deliver by company.
Initiating at 5000 number of parcels delivered by TNT service company in 1920 and increasing to double (10,000) in 1940, the number of parcels delivers sharply declined in 1990 before inclined at 25000 in the last year.
Overall, starting year FedEx company was inclining whereas TNT company declined first year while in the last year TNT was increasing dramatically.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'delivered'.
Suggestion: delivered
...able at approximately 18000 parcels was deliver by company. Initiating at 5000 numbe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, then, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 965.302439024 73% => OK
No of words: 133.0 196.424390244 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31578947368 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67715633376 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 75.0 106.607317073 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563909774436 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 22.4926829268 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.9780659552 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 176.75 112.824112599 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.25 22.9334400587 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317867797702 0.215688989381 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.220563701486 0.103423049105 213% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136425865212 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220563701486 0.15604864568 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.136425865212 0.0819641961636 166% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.3 13.2329268293 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 61.2550243902 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.9970731707 138% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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