The line graph illustrates changes in the number of parcels that two main mail services companies, Federal Express (FedEx) and TNT, delivered in a period of 80 years, between 1930 and 2000.
Overall, FedEx used to be the leader in the mail services industry, from 1920 to 1980. However, this position was dominated by TNT from 1990 to 2000.
In 1920, the number of parcels that FedEx delivered was at 15000 items and tripled the one of TNT. After that, TNT was witnessed with a moderate increase in the number of parcels, reached around 12000 parcels in 1960. In terms of FedEx’s delivered parcels, it considerably grew and reached a peak of about 24000 items in 1940. However, it steeply plummeted to a little more than the level of TNT in 1960.
Afterward, the number of delivered parcels of FedEx noticeably rose by roughly 6000 items in 1980 and then leveled off till 2000. Meanwhile, the year of 1990 marked TNT’s substantial success to overtake the market share of FedEx, where the number of delivered parcels approximately doubled to 22000 items and then peaked at just under 25000 parcels in 2000.
- The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000 79
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- The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nations statistics Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 73
- SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE BEST WAY TO IMPROVE PUBLIC HEALTH IS BY INCREASING THE NUMBER OF SPORTS FACILITIES OTHERS HOWEVER SAY THAT THIS WOULD HAVE LITTLE EFFECT ON PUBLIC HEALTH AND THAT OTHER MEASURES ARE REQUIRED DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 33.7804878049 130% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 920.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8167539267 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47310025761 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 106.607317073 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55497382199 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9679153494 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.222222222 112.824112599 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2222222222 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.22222222222 5.23603664747 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282236329153 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122455833014 0.103423049105 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657574213791 0.0843802449381 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205464975032 0.15604864568 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191076508143 0.0819641961636 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.