The diagram below show how glass container such as bottles ,are produce and recycled
The given diagram illustrate the information about the manufacturing process of the glass container and other diagram show the process of recycling
Of used bottles. It is clear and coherent representation .
It can be seen that a glass is made by the mixing of various materials : sand , soda ash, and limestone and other chemicals . After the mixing of these raw material . Next stage is melting .In this stage all the raw materials mixture are heated at approximately 1500 degree Celsius in the glass furnace . Further step is shaping , the melted glass all provided shape by the blowing , to make glass containers in the last step
As per as trend is concerned in addition to this is recycling process . In this process the first and foremost step is that to collect the used glass and then It can be sorted according to its colour .In the next step wash the glass to remove the impurities from it .last second step is that crushed the glass and melted the glass ,and resulting molten glass can finally be moulded to create a new item.
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...a ash, and limestone and other chemicals . After the mixing of these raw material ...
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...sh, and limestone and other chemicals . After the mixing of these raw material . Next...
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...o make glass containers in the last step As per as trend is concerned in addition...
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...in addition to this is recycling process . In this process the first and foremost...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73480662983 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55174157029 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546961325967 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.5726281275 43.030603864 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 122.428571429 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 5.23603664747 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 1.69756097561 1591% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190112941772 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0818964275755 0.103423049105 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0860287531768 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121369685263 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.099938267405 0.0819641961636 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.