Some people believe that they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state do you agree or disagree .
A government for the people must depend for its success on the intelligence, the morality, The Justice,and the interest of the people themselves.In the current time of technology, one of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic is that should local people keep all the earning money or they should not pay tax to the state .I shall explore from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
Now, I am totally agree with this statement that everyone earn the money to fulfill the needs of their family and children in the form of the school fees and other activities. People have earn less amount they cannot afford to pay the tax. They are very difficultly balance the necessities of all the member of family government take the promises to people to provides the all the facilities related to public service.For example In the development country government provide a hospital for those people who are under the poverty line . The government was order that all benefits for the poor people are free of costs but we can see that In this type of hospital there is no availability of labs, medical store and machine .poor people are unable to pay to the fees of the civil medical stores .
On the other hand, Government collect the taxes from the people for development .Government is responsible for the basics education of the children who cannot pay the school fees but now Government ignore this issue . In the government school the students are not treated well and there is no availability of teacher or basics needs of the students.A survey conducted by the Hindustan time s that In the developing country India near about 60% people are illitrate and only 40% people are educated due to ineffective education system of the school of the country.
Thus , it can be as certained that it is a debateable issue believe that people who earn more than the predefined money tax and not for those people who earn less than that amount ,. Government should not force the poor people to pay tax.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, thus, well, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81502890173 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61856995877 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488439306358 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.462001497 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.111111111 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.4444444444 20.7667163134 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305742470055 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.154016499471 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103980159401 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.208408089275 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933925607411 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.5 13.0946893788 157% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.