The given flow chart illustrates the information about the stages of production of glass containers and how they are recycled. It is clear that three stages in the process of making of glass containers and four steps in recycling of glass required respectively.
It can be seen that the first stage in the production of glass is mixing of sand, soda, limestone and other chemicals has to be done. The second step involves melting in a glass furnace at approximately 1500 degree celcius . After molten glass has been blown onto different sizes and shapes. After all this process, the glass containers become ready.
Moving further, the process pf recycling involves firstly the collection of used glasses. After, collecting these glasses they are sorted out by colour then washing of glasses has been done to remove impurities. Furthermore, the crushing and melting of glasses has been done to mould them into new products.
- The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Australia’s share of the Japanese tourist market.Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. 71
- In modern world, many children spend a lot of time in front of computers,television and smartphones. This is very harmful to them. To what extent do you agree. 61
- The diagram below show how glass container such as bottles ,are produce and recycled 61
- Research indicates that the characteristics we are born with have much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have on our life.Which do you consider to be the major influence? 61
- The charts below show reasons for travel and the main issues for the travelling public in the US in 2009. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ace at approximately 1500 degree celcius . After molten glass has been blown onto ...
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Line 5, column 91, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...firstly the collection of used glasses. After, collecting these glasses they are sor...
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Line 5, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y the collection of used glasses. After, collecting these glasses they are sorted...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, so, then, after all, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13157894737 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67026861696 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.9819326839 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.6666666667 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 5.23603664747 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194223892138 0.215688989381 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0860725472928 0.103423049105 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503290390937 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143522646587 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548396321857 0.0819641961636 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 40.7170731707 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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