Development in the metro cities has grown rapidly and with this there issues are also increased. This growth lead to major problems especially for youth. This essay will discuss some of these issues and represent some solutions for it.
First of all, living in the big cities can be extremely difficult for youth due to high living cost. As the most number of youth from small towns come into the large cities in search of job. With this cities get congested and juveniles face difficulty to get accomodation in budget. Secondly, with the increased number of youngones in these cities the youth faces problems to get employed in their respective fields. As there are more competition among them for that one job. Lastly, the issue like pollution is also increased as the population rised and with the rise in population number of vehicles also inclined which results in the polluted environment of these cities.
To solve these issues government should provide effective measures. To begin with, imposing less tax on their accomodation will benefit the youngones to fullfill there living expenses. Moreover, authorities should develop smaller towns with which the youth from these small cities get jobs in there towns and they do not need to migrate to the larger cities. Leadership should also increase the use of public transport which will help to control the pollution related problems.
To conclude, noticeable changes in metropolises come with corresponding problems. However, these problems can be addressed by the involvement of administration.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1312.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.248 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.683281573 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9543322366 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.4666666667 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265204108851 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0875797894931 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514410461465 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156449151245 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0280197796781 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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