The diagram illustrates species salmon fish in the life cycle.
Overall, some places are needed for salmon to grow and survive. Also, various sizes are determined from their locations to live.
Initially, salmon eggs live in the upper river, placing with slow current movement, while there are plants of reeds and small stones which maintain eggs for a plethora of predators in the water, and they usually thrive there almost a half year. Afterwards, they become the fry with size 3-8 cm, and the groups of fry move to lower river in a fast flowing current during 4 years.
In the next stages, the fry grows into smolt with the measure 12-15 cm, then the smolt can be seen in the sea, while they survive in there for 5 years. For along it, the growing of smolt becomes adult salmon with 70-76 cm size, and those do the marriage in open sea. After that, if the spawning is wanted by the adults, they will swim back to river and put salmon eggs in upper river plants.
- The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The two maps below show an island before and after the construction of some tourist facilities Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The diagram below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- Many teenagers now have the their own smartphone what are the advantages and disadvantages of this and give your opinion 82
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant Write at least 150 words 11
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53977272727 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.02520755747 2.65546596893 76% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630681818182 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.340948501 43.030603864 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.875 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.125 5.23603664747 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0716457315237 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501724112025 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0895817261582 0.0843802449381 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886286122436 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112918269385 0.0819641961636 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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