The bar chart gives information about the average times married men and married women spend on weekly non-profit tasks.
As can be seen from the chart, it is noticeable that from all the bars (no children, 1-2 children, 3 or more children), women spend more time on unpaid work such as childcare in the home, household chores and gardening rather than men.
To begin with, it is inevitable that women who have more than three descendants spend the highest time on unpaid work, and are responsible for about 60 hours, which is threefold compared with men in the same category. In contrast, women who nurture no children only do 30 hours of housework, while those of males only spend 19 hours on it. Surprisingly, the figure of 1-2 children men corresponds to that of no offspring men, which is also 19 hours spent on non-profit work. On the other hand, roughly 52 hours of housework are in charge of women who nurture 1-2 children.
- The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home housework and gardening Describe the information presented below comparing results 73
- It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote area environment such as South Pole do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages 78
- Some people believe that course of performing arts example Dance music drama etc should be funded by government others believe that this should funded through other way example business students family discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- Health experts believe that walking is a good exercise for health However people are walking less nowadays Why is this happening How can people be encouraged to walk more 73
- Some people think that they can create as much noise as they want while others think that the amount of noise people make should be strictly controlled Discuss both the views 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...men spend on weekly non-profit tasks. As can be seen from the chart, it is not...
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... chores and gardening rather than men. To begin with, it is inevitable that wom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, while, in contrast, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.15609756098 253% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 777.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73780487805 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53654872159 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59756097561 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9157972105 43.030603864 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.5 112.824112599 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 22.9334400587 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 5.23603664747 226% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152804854415 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768678000178 0.103423049105 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0249509645515 0.0843802449381 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102697010334 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267417447336 0.0819641961636 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.06136585366 96% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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