The diagram below shows changes to one university campus

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows changes to one university campus.

The given maps illustrate the transformations which one university campus experienced over a period of 33 years from 1985 to the present time (2018).

In 1985, the university grounds had various sites. To the northwest, was a library. Car park, physics and biology blocks were situated in the north east, and to the south east was an admin building. Also, another car park was located in south west.

Remarkable changes has accrued today. Firstly, a number of buildings are repurposed. While the south-western car park has become a bust terminal, albeit in smaller size, a small circular-shaped lecture theatre has been erected in the place of the other car park in north-eastern. Moreover, the library has enlarged to the south, becoming a library and IT center.

Secondly, three sites are completely demolished. These included the physics and the chemistry blocked which have been overhauled to make room for a science laboratory and the biology block has been demolished as well.

Lastly, instead of the road, now different areas are connected to each other through footpath which have resulted in reducing the size of some building, such as the admin building.

Votes
Average: 6.6 (12 votes)
This essay topic by users
Post date Users Rates Link to Content
2021-10-21 Vuthungan 96 view

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 356, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'centers'?
Suggestion: centers
...to the south, becoming a library and IT center. Secondly, three sites are completel...
^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18421052632 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83502529461 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 283.868780488 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.9271560677 43.030603864 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8333333333 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 5.23603664747 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0760353485425 0.215688989381 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291363698369 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528381539394 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433964701272 0.15604864568 28% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0592670210002 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

---------------------
Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.