The given illustration demonstrates the typical stages of the product life cycle.
Overall, it is a 7-step, man-made, cyclical process, which begins from the planning & design of a future product and finishes with feedback and recycling or disposing of.
The first stage of the cycle related to the planning & design of a new product regarding the feedback of consumers. After that, lots of materials and energy resources are collected in a factory for creating this product. The next stage related to manufacturing the planned and designed production. Then, finished goods are packed and distributed among stores and shops.
In the next stage, this product sold to consumers. After using these goods by people, it is usually thrown away or moved to recycle. Nonetheless, after utilizing this product, people give feedback, which plays a huge role in planning and designing new versions of goods. However, the recycled goods move straightly to the factory as a material for creating a new production.
- Nowadays in some countries children are given fewer responsibilities compared to the past Some people believe it is a positive development while others argue otherwise Discuss both the views What is your opinion give reasons and relevant examples from 61
- The diagram below shows the environment issues raised by a product over its life cycle Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 11
- The table below gives information on internet using six categories by age group Describe the information in the table and make comparisons where appropriate 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...g the feedback of consumers. After that, lots of materials and energy resources a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 848.0 965.302439024 88% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80412742584 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60625 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.3989520794 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.8 112.824112599 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0632221405111 0.215688989381 29% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.029109730018 0.103423049105 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295558596607 0.0843802449381 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0480467146677 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234671802655 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.06136585366 120% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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