The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The diagram illustrates the eleven stages of coffee manufacturing before it arrives to retail. Overall, this is a labor-intensive linear process which consists of double repetitive steps such as dry, cool and grid.

To begin, the coffee beans are picked by hand in the fields in order to being dried in the sun on the following stage. Then, these beans are roasted in a container. After that, they are cool rapidly and before having been mixed with hot water, the beans are grinned on a special machine which turns the beans into coffee granules.

Following that, the resulting mixture is strained that to remove excess liquid. At the next stage, the blend is frozen in a second time in a cooling chamber and then run repeatedly into grinder. There is dried again in a vacuum which evaporated water. The result of this tenth stage is coffee which ready for package. Finally, the special equipment is used for packaging coffee into jar in order to be sold in markets.

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Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, second, so, then, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 965.302439024 84% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80357142857 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46160280685 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0095574802 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.7 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0951852213848 0.215688989381 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396660561864 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463718373455 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648083931416 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164923067197 0.0819641961636 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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