The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how coffee is produced and prepared for sale in supermarkets and shops.

The process of coffee production and preparation to sale in supermarkets and stores is displayed in the diagram.
Overall, the process is consisted of harvesting and manufacturing. Furthermore, there are some stages, starting from picking the beans to packing those into jars.
Firstly, the coffee beans are harvested in the farm before those are heated under the Sun, and the next process is to roast the selected beans. After that, beans are cooled quickly into freezer, then grinding them prior to mixing with hot temperature water. Regarding the filtering step, the mixture has to be strained from the water.
Turning to the freezing stage, coffee beans refreeze into refrigerator, so that it can be grinded again. Thereafter, heating in a vacuum is needed to evaporate the water contained in the coffee ones. When it comes to the last stage, those are sealed in the jars, and be labelled, and already to be stored in supermarkets and shops.

Votes
Average: 8.2 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, regarding, so, then, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05732484076 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71466133836 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592356687898 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 242.1 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1025625215 43.030603864 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 112.824112599 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4444444444 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121569425431 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057498299663 0.103423049105 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101820591204 0.0843802449381 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108950336463 0.15604864568 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.135437845572 0.0819641961636 165% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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