The diagram illustrates the working of a Hydroelectric power station to generate electricity. It shows the different components indicating the process of producing the electricity from a Dam.
The main principle by which the electricity is made is through the flow of water. The Power station is designed to allow the water to flow through multiple levels of equipment which in turn helps produce the electricity and send it to the National grid.
The Power Station is built on a river in which the water is flowing naturally. The largest part of the entire station is the Dam which stores the water and then channels it towards the turbines in the power station during the day before reaching a lower level reservoir. This results in turbines rotating which are in turn connected to a generator where the electricity is produced. The electricity generated is then connected to the National grid through the Power lines. During the night, the water from the lower level reservoir is pumped back through the reversible turbines.
The Hydroelectric power station works full time but the water flows in the opposite directions during the day and night.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ity and send it to the National grid. The Power Station is built on a river in wh...
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...n which the water is flowing naturally. The largest part of the entire station is t...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... channels it towards the turbines in the power station during the day before reac...
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
... The Hydroelectric power station works full time but the water flows in the opposite dir...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 962.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 191.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03664921466 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74862627697 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476439790576 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 299.7 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.306473252 43.030603864 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 5.23603664747 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212847947933 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105426570637 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0626402298108 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150433973812 0.15604864568 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560980201191 0.0819641961636 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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