There have been some problems with the bus service especially its reliability in your area over the last two weeks Write a letter to the manager of the bus company In your letter describe what the problems are explain how these problems are affecting you

Dear Sir,
Being a regular user of the BRTS Bus Service, I am writing this to inform you about the irregularities of the bus schedule since past 2 weeks. This is affecting many people using the bus service from Miyapur, majorly towards Gachibowli in the mornings.
BRTS has been an extremely reliable means of transport for people in my locality from many years. As most of the young people living in my locality work in IT related companies in Gachibowli, it is the most convenient way to reach their respective offices using the Bus service. But, since the past two weeks, I has come to my notice that the buses are not running on time. This is putting the passengers in serious trouble since the corporate companies are very particular regarding the punctuality of their employees. As I have read on the news, I assume this is due to an ongoing strike by many BRTS employees.
I sincerely request you to resolve the issue as quickly as possible since it has been affecting the daily deeds of the people in the area.

Yours Sincerely,
Chan

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 312, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...rvice. But, since the past two weeks, I has come to my notice that the buses are no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, regarding, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67567567568 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59727339191 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578378378378 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.4999645239 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.1111111111 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 16.8248392259 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14581082778 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613269239386 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341012320907 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988149010524 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030804650517 0.0580467560999 53% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 8.37731958763 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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