The information about process of making ethanol oil by using corn is illustrated by the given diagram. There are 9 steps to complete the production which begin from collecting corns and ends with transportation oil to market.
Overall, it is crystal clear that the ethanol fuel follow several stages those are essental for manufacturing oil from corn. If any step in this process missed or skipped, whole process will be halted.
At the first glance, it can be seen from diagram that process start from collecting corn from fields which are harvested by farmers. After that they are store to cold storage. Then stored corns moved to mill were production begin. The first step in industry is cooking corn for 4 hours by adding some amount of water. The next step after cooking is fermenting which takes about 2 day. In this stage boils corns are pressed by large machines.
Moving further, ferment corns are separated into two different substance one is liquid form and second is solid. The liquid form of corns are purify for 5 hours to make ensure that ethanol is pure. Then the process of parking start and parked product again store into cold store. At last, transportation is done were ethanol oil send to market for sailing to people.
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- The diagram below shows how ethanol fuel is produced from corn
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... fields which are harvested by farmers. After that they are store to cold storage. Th...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...store to cold storage. Then stored corns moved to mill were production begin. The...
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Line 4, column 142, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'purified'.
Suggestion: purified
... is solid. The liquid form of corns are purify for 5 hours to make ensure that ethanol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1029.0 965.302439024 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80841121495 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39613938918 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 106.607317073 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588785046729 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.8400401472 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5 112.824112599 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 22.9334400587 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.92857142857 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230291621989 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0793676376273 0.103423049105 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736563836185 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151497532733 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369903492154 0.0819641961636 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.2329268293 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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